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Tuesday, 22 May 2018

Painting a Picture in the reader's head

WALT use our senses in our writing to painting a in the reader's head.

Here is an example of my writing. Can you imagine the scene in your head?
The ship got caught in a storm. It was hit by a giant wave. It’s sunk straight to the bottom of the sea. I can see a fish swimming around the boat in the water that is many shades of blue.
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1 comment:

  1. Tash12 September 2018 at 12:07

    Kia ora Vilar
    I enjoyed reading this writing. In my mind I was picturing just what you were saying. Ka Pai.
    Tash

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